We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Globalization is nowadays a phenomena across the globe. So, nations are now easily informed about the others easily.So, supporting others in the world in legitimate terms should be done and in fact focusing only to our communities needs are not a wise decision because nations are now more connected than before through social medias. If earthquake, flood, or masquerade happens in other countries this information would easily disseminate through them in which al humans suffer. In this essay, I will outline why helping every one is fruitful for the globe.
To begin with, poverty is a significant issues around the world. The government would try to invest more money in their countries to bring wealth and jobs to their nations. Particularly, developing countries open a lot of opportunities for developed countries to persuade them to build up their technology or factories in order to lessen the gap between rich and poor. For instance, india has let international cooperation to open their call center through india. In that way, more people find the jobs and consequently corporation would have ample resources for this purpose. So, connection between nations let people to have more opportunities especially in developed countries.
Another point is that internet and social media makes possible for nations to connect with each others. It is now possible to educate people while you settle down in other countries. More over, it is possible to understand other belief and values just by searching on the google. To take an example, English teachers have enoromous opportunities to learn non-native speakers across the globe through internet. So now lot of website or app created for this purpose. As a result, helping others are possible and it would be beneficial for both parties.
In sum, connections is now eminent and let peoples to reach other very quickly and easily. So it is better to empower people across the globe because
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... empower people across the globe because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20886075949 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79612739211 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3842349689 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122249011477 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038834782383 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395837255765 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708897249201 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409680850633 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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