Wealthy nations should assist pooper countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays earthquakes, hurricanes , tsunami and tornados occur all around the world. Some people claim that when such accidents take place in poor countries rich nations should step up and provide humanitarian aid for those in need. I completely agree with this statement.
To begin with, developing countries often do not have sufficient funds to allocate money for sustenance, medicine and shelter for its citizens during catastrophic events. Natural disasters destroy houses, hospitals and harvests leaving thousands of people without a shelter and possibility to satisfy basic needs. However, difficult economical situation in poor countries may not allow to fulfill all these demands as it requires significant expenses. As a result, many people may die from starvation and lack of medical treatment thought and after the disaster. On contrary, wealthy nations can afford such contribution and therefore to save many lives. For example, when an earthquake occurred in Haiti in 00’s many western countries sent clothes, food , medicine and equipment. Thousands of people survived due to this relief.
Moreover, international assistance and participation in dealing with consequences of natural disasters facilitates cooperation and friendship between nations in the future. The government of the country in need could pay back the favor by reducing import taxes and ease trade policies . This would lead to stronger business connections between countries bringing a profit for both economies. For instance, when Japan was hit by tsunami Vietnam came forward and offered 200 thousand dollars for humanitarian purposes. Japan in return lowered taxes for some of the imported goods from Vietnam establishing thriving trade connection between the countries.
To conclude, undoubtedly prosperous nations ought to render necessary aid in the time of natural disasters in the underprivileged regions of our planet. This action would rescue a lot of human lives and ensure closer relationships between countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71666666667 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9675564915 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8942189374 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197884968378 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547699958317 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480529144302 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107306885446 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372764727296 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.