What are the main causes of deforestation, and how do they affect the environment and discuss about the possible solution
It has believed that forests are the lungs of the earth. While deforestation and the practical solutions to stop it are a public concern these days, statistics show it is still going on. In this short essay, I will elaborate on the causes, impacts and what we should do to stop it.
Wood and land are the main reasons behind the mass cutting of trees. Although there are some regulations in support of forest conservation in almost all countries, still illegal logging is vastly happening because some people see forests as free sources of wood. Besides, needing the land under the forests for a variety of purposes like road making, mining, house constructions, etc is another reason for the clearcutting of the trees.
Of course, the consequences will not be just for the people involved in it but for everyone. First, trees are the best weapon that we have against carbon dioxide. Thus, fewer trees mean more air pollution, and consequently global warming, more disease, and much more difficulties for human-being. What is more, destroying jungles can lead to destroying of the ecosystem as some species may need to immigrate to find a new habitat as a result of deforestation which will affect the food web as well. Therefore, this can cause the extinction of the species as they may not adapt to their new living conditions.
The question is, what should we do to stop it or minimize the damage? In my opinion, strict regulation is not enough to prevent illegal activities. There must be organizations which are responsible for supervising every human activity in jungles. Besides, however, sometimes clearcutting might be inevitable, reforestation and minimizing its negative impacts on the ecosystems are the least responsibilities of authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... and the practical solutions to stop it are a public concern these days, statistics...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, of course, as a result, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0830449827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96978957973 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608996539792 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4246068337 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110143679371 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330252540831 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041596707015 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611420532763 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348010165452 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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