You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbor to com

Dear Neighbors,
I hope this letter finds you well,
I'm sending this letter to introduce myself and let you know about my plan to hold a party at the weekend. My name is Masoud, and I'm excited to be your new neighbour. I recently moved into unit #709, and I want to extend a warm welcome.
As a celebration, I'm going to hold a party on Saturday night and invite a couple of friends to my new place. The plan is to celebrate my first home by opening a bottle of champagne, having drinks, dancing and playing games like Mafia or Code-Name, and, of course, having food. For dinner, I'm going to order pizza for everyone.
First, I would like to apologize in advance for any inconvenience that this party may cause. Second, I would be honoured to have you all join us for the party. I believe this party can help us to know each other better which is a prerequisite to building a strong and friendly community.
Please let me know if you are able to attend,
Best Regards,
Masoud

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s, I hope this letter finds you well, Im sending this letter to introduce myself...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... at the weekend. My name is Masoud, and Im excited to be your new neighbour. I rec...
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Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tend a warm welcome. As a celebration, Im going to hold a party on Saturday night...
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Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd, of course, having food. For dinner, Im going to order pizza for everyone. Fir...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, well, of course, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4010989011 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48276877785 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9951247029 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279600606115 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903701981928 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597241274844 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134007486441 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785128529908 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s, I hope this letter finds you well, Im sending this letter to introduce myself...
^^
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... at the weekend. My name is Masoud, and Im excited to be your new neighbour. I rec...
^^
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...tend a warm welcome. As a celebration, Im going to hold a party on Saturday night...
^^
Line 4, column 289, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd, of course, having food. For dinner, Im going to order pizza for everyone. Fir...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, well, of course, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4010989011 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48276877785 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9951247029 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279600606115 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903701981928 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597241274844 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134007486441 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785128529908 0.0580467560999 135% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.