What distinguishes young people from their parents or grandparents generation is lack of physical exercise. Today’s generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV and too little time being active.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In present era, children used to spend more time on social networking sites, playing virtual games or watching television, as compare to their parents used to spend in their childhood. Though this may not be the statement of fact for every individual, but it’s true for majority of young generation. Many factors are contributing to this scenario, which can be seen as elaborated below.
With urbanization of society, especially in big cities and towns, the play grounds and gardens are vanishing. Every toddler is tide up with his / her own schedule of school or college, coaching classes, extracurricular classes and studies. Hence no enough time is available for exercise and playing physical games. Other way round, in the school days of our parents or grandparents, the schedule for all the children was almost matching hence many friends were available during their play time. Also as technology evolution was not there during that era, so electronic gadgets like video games, television, internet was not into existence at all or may be just emerging. Now-a-days parents are also busy in their work schedule and can hardly give any time for their kids. This leads to weak family bonds and a kid becomes introvert. Hence he finds it more appealing to spend time on social networking sites rather than making real friends.
But in spite of all these odds, due to higher stress levels in today’s young people, and understanding it’s ill effects on health of an individual, many people engages themselves in morning walks, yoga or laughter clubs. They also try to attend gyms on regular basis to become fit and healthy. So it’s not the case of un-awareness but many youngsters are enthusiastic about their health and spending time in physical activities. Some are using bicycles or going by walk for visiting nearby places instead of cars or public transport. Try to get some gym equipment in the home itself.
So to conclude, I can say that with times and modernization, today’s techniques of being active have been changed as compared to older generations. But with more and more awareness towards healthier and stress free life style with use of exercises and yoga, people are developing interest in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, thus, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70950130401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611413043478 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2159784779 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141922822506 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411883311382 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500062676796 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847439121638 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037828829361 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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