When People succeed, it is because of hard working. Luck has nothing to do with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I am totally agreed with the statement that when people success in their daily life is not depends upon the luck. There is no any kind of compare with the success and the luck. Success and luck are two different thing success comprises on three things.
Firstly, success comes from the hardworking of person how much he works hard for the achievement of goal. For the achievement of that goal a person starts striving for the result and do many efforts so that he can able to achieve goal and after he achieves a goal then It will be converted in to success.
Secondly, success comes from the motivation of a person. A who is very much motivated he will not lose his moral for the achievement of goal, and for the attainment of that goal he will motivated and struggle hard after that he will success because of not losing the motivational level.
Thirdly, success doesn’t not come from one day it takes time for the achievement of that goal a success person will work consistent for the achievement of that goal instead of making lame excuses on luck.
A person who has developed three skills in their personality i.e. Hardworking, motivation and consistence on work. He has the luckiest person because he has worked on his personality and develop these skills. After that he can say that he is a luckiest person in the society. Lastly, a person who make luck by himself focusing on the skills which God has given to him and he just has to analyze so that he can become a successful man. In my point of view those persons who only focus on the luck and not doing anything in their life are the laziest person in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... is not depends upon the luck. There is no any kind of compare with the success an...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'motivate'
Suggestion: motivate
...for the attainment of that goal he will motivated and struggle hard after that he will su...
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Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s personality and develop these skills. After that he can say that he is a luckiest p...
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...kills. After that he can say that he is a luckiest person in the society. Lastly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5472972973 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49457958767 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469594594595 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0075016108 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895199402192 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443145101317 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486582054418 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585389287256 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484138198772 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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