While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Some people think that global warming is the most burning issue of modern era. Whereas, others consider deforestation more destructive for the environment. However I believe that both have adverse effects on our lives.
Global warming is a result of air and land pollution. Waste from factories and emission of smoke from industries and vehicles have affected environment badly. Depletion of ozone layer as a result of pollutants has increased temperature enormously. Firstly, soaring temperature has detrimental effects on agriculture and crops. Moreover, fecund fields could turn into dry lands due to global warming. Secondly, it is causative factor towards floods and other natural disasters such as cyclones and hurricanes. Global warming creates imbalance in climate, hence, resulting extreme temperature across the globe. Furthermore, aquatic life is also endangered due to melting of ice burgs and fluctuation in temperature.
Some people think that deforestation is bigger threat than global warming. Ruthless cutting of trees for wood and fire has resulted in immense shortage of woodlands globally. Additionally illegal tree cutting by timber mafia has brought many forests on verge of destruction. Firstly, deforestation causes escalation in temperature which forces terrestrial animals to migrate hence affecting wildlife and other habitants. Furthermore, when swath of trees are cut down the area becomes prone to floods and other environmental disasters
Finally, in my opinion, deforestation and global warming are equally disastrous. Both have resulting in soaring temperature and rapid climate changes across the world. Creating Awareness among the masses is a robust way to cope with harmful effects of both factors on human lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73563218391 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95138056351 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6249725516 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236680895536 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691655545788 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666212675884 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164671658296 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103528450507 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.42 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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