Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
You should write at least 250 words.
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Rigorous punishments and stringent laws are extremely important to control crimes; otherwise society would not be a safe place to live in. I accord with this notion although punishment is not the only solution to curb crimes that I will explain in my further paragraphs.
Every life has a right to live without any fear and hesitation in his/her society. However, existence of criminals or offenders make people's life miserable, which are the hindrance to our freedom. For instance, a thief can steal someone's hard earn money, while he is not at home or while walking in dark street alone. This act of robbery can ruin some innocent one's life. In fact, robber may kill him/her if he/she opposes. To control such heinous act, strict punishment such as capital punishment is essential for the society. To illustrate, Dubai is a country where robbery would lead to death punishment as a result such crime rate is almost nil, whereas in India, theft cases are the highest, as there is no such strict law.
However, can anyone assure that capital punishment would help to curb crimes like theft, rape murder? We must find the root cause of such heinous act. Major issues of each criminal are that they are from deprive background, have poor education and unable to find job for daily earning. There are several ways to tackle these issues. Firstly, government must identify the skill gap and facilities among deprive society. Then, if proper education and job opportunities are given to all low earning people, they can earn daily wages. Secondly, mind-set of society towards criminals must be changed, as people hesitate to offer work to criminal. Even though a criminal wants to live a healthy life after a crime, society forces him/her to go back to his dark world due to lack of opportunity.
To sum up, although stringent punishment like death penalty is essential to control crime rate and to have a safe society, educational facility and job opportunity should also be given to them so that they can healthy life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90406976744 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5180241955 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598837209302 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1043426083 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184533997937 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528302634287 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605664651224 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123537923941 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378684807723 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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