Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is always a conflict between the bureaucrats and public on the death punishment for a capital crime. Therefore, it is a debatable topic that it should be avoided or implemented. I partially agree with this statement and describing my points of view in the ensuing paragraph.

To commence with, some unpardonable and cruel crimes need to death sentences because they have ruined human life, country's economy and raise terror in the world. For instance, Osama Bin Laden attacked on World Trade Center of U.S.A. where number of people died and also it was an attack on the American economy. Moreover, this attack threatened the whole world that terrorist can attack anywhere and this was the message that they were the most powerful organization in the world. So, for the counter-attack, it was necessary that Osama Bin will get a death punishment and U.S.A. government had done this brave task.

On the flip side, all the crimes are not a capital crime to punish as a death sentence, however, some Gulf countries like Saudi Arab, Qatar, and Bahrain where rules are strict and they have a constitution of hang till death on the myriad of pardonable offense. Additionally, it is not the right way to eradicate crime from the route. For instance, in underdeveloped countries like India where population, illiteracy, impoverishment, and unemployment which are causing factors to propels youth for crime, need a proper system for education and employment rather than death punishment to eradicate these unsocial activities.

To conclude, I think death punishment is applicable at a certain level to establish law and order in the nation, however, for eradication need to focus on route cause analysis.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'propel'.
Suggestion: propel
...employment which are causing factors to propels youth for crime, need a proper system f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13620071685 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88733204224 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5913900076 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.272727273 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172653115194 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698914610088 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559990785334 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110589988093 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451376671815 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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