Dear Sir,
I am working as Sr. R.F. engineer in your organization and looking care for L.T.E. networking for the Newyork market. As you know, many other operators and vendors are testing the new technology 5G and I.O.T. which will have a great scope in upcoming years.
As I am L.T.E. specialist and both mentioned technologies are an extended version of L.T.E. and well-known telecom company Ericsson announced to organize a workshop to share some experiences and knowledge from 5th September to 10th September.
Moreover, the financial year will be closed in August last and there will be less pressure on the network team. Therefore, I think, this is a suitable time period to join this workshop which will fruitful for an organization to compete with other organizations.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Regards
Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am working as Sr. R.F. engineer in you...
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Suggestion:
... some experiences and knowledge from 5th September to 10th September. Moreover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 138.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15942028986 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83610265344 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8967168071 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 76.5299724578 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108995444904 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453275756742 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314379153197 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633474391312 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411116629098 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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