The world is becoming more complex, and the wars still exist across the whole world. Many countries to defend their sovereignty, draft not just male soldiers but also females. Some believe that women should be excluded from the service, and I do support the view point completely based on number of grounds.
First and foremost, physical strengths are required to excel better in the army, wars, and men have been proven to be stronger than women in this case. Physical power is essential to carry heavy weapons such as grenade launchers, automatic rifles, travel long distances under harsh weather climates. when the enemy side is equipped with stronger male soldiers, sending women to fight that army is a disadvantage. Furthermore, a slow pace of female soldiers can put the army back as the advancement to he targeted location can slow down. Furthermore, scientific studies suggest that men have fast reflexive attention in contrast to women which comes helpful during war situations. To illustrate, a male can dodge enemy fires faster than female soldiers, hence increasing their and army's chance of survival.
Secondly, females should stay behind to bring up children who will be the future soldiers to defend their nations and harvest and prepare food for soldiers in front rows. Wars usually do not end once and for all, therefore, countries should expect to be attacked in the future. As females are the only species to bring children to earth, their participation in the wars can result in the precipitous decline in the count of them. as a result, countries' population will grow slower than their adversaries. This can lead to the loss of the future wars as a result. Aside the advanced military technology, the count of the army is crucial as well.
In conclusion, considering the role of women in the society as the breeder of future generations, their role in the army should be scaled down.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00374531835 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67658488833 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8478652049 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155869754973 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537805924607 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394431960705 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105548736608 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326625087448 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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