Write a 250-300 word essay about causes and effects of eating fast food too much.
In modern day, not only does fast food play a fundamental role in daily life but it also has recently been internationally widespread. I will discuss the main reasons and possible consequences of this common occurrence in the following piece of writing.
At the beginning, several changes in lifestyles straight result in a huge expenditure of fast food. Unlike women in the past, who merely were housewives and stayed at home all day, these days, especially in metropolitan areas, both of male and female are up to their ears in heavy workload. Thus, delicious and convenient fast food certainly becomes the best choice. Since they obligatorily face up with stress working from dusk until dawn, they practically pick out takeout food rather than homemade meals. Besides, fast food’s services are approvingly good. Restaurants providing junk food invariably contain rapid service and enjoyable places for entertainment and relaxing after a hard working day. According to a survey, most officers regularly ingest fast food with a view to saving time for extra-hour working. Their job takes them a full day, hence, they use online reservation and free delivery of takeout food’s restaurant, which is appropriate for their job.
In terms of effects, fast food negatively conducts a wide range of results to human-being. Junk food, which contains a handful of high calories and no nutritional value, directly leads to health concerns such as obesity, cancer, heart disease, diabetes and chronic ailment. To illustrate, about fifty percent of the adults in Europe suffer from obesity and they assume that 45 percent of their food’s budget is spent on fast food. Additionally, excessive consumption of junk food may incredibly impact comprehensive growing of kids as a healthy body requires critical nutrients for growth and development. Coupled with deficient nutrition levels is psychological behaviour like depression. An excessive consumption of takeout meals unfavourably influences human’s brain because junk food acts like an addiction, it causes the imbalance of hormones and then pushes people to eat more and more of this type of unwholesome cuisine.
In a nutshell, inactive lifestyles accompanied with the popularity of fast food bring on a great deal of dismissive aspects to humans. Residents had better make a moderate change in order to enjoy a lifelong expectancy.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ropolitan areas, both of male and female are up to their ears in heavy workload. ...
^^
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d convenient fast food certainly becomes the best choice. Since they obligatorily...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37866666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94719633249 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0351784435 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.055555556 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176209114976 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567177592703 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433809875448 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094686663758 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373751416787 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ropolitan areas, both of male and female are up to their ears in heavy workload. ...
^^
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d convenient fast food certainly becomes the best choice. Since they obligatorily...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37866666667 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94719633249 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0351784435 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.055555556 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176209114976 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567177592703 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433809875448 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094686663758 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373751416787 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.