Write about the advantages and disadvantages of playing computer games, then suggest solutions for alleviating its negative effects.
In this day and age, more and more children are playing computer games, which raises a controversial dispute about whether children should play games. While the advocates assure that games bring people with a myriad of advantages, others contend that it is detrimental for their children. This essay would discuss both views and propose possible resolutions to alleviate the negative impacts of playing computer games.
On the one hand, computer games have a number of positive effects.
To commence, it enhances children’s skills as well as their ability. To be more specific, children who play games related to fashion can create virtual clothes; thus, they can ameliorate their creativity. In addition, playing games such as League Legends also helps adolescents to gain their problem-solving skills and strategy-plan skill. Another benefit of computer games would be they help people to unwind after a hectic schedule. It is primarily because the display of games is not only considered attractive but also engaging. A current study has indicated that about 65% of students play games after school to relax.
On the other hand, there are ample drawbacks of games that people should take into consideration. To begin with, playing games is deleterious to people’s physical health, especially their eyes. It would be elaborated by the fact that about 70% of short-sighted people are diagnosed it cause is due to using computer or smartphone playing games in a poor condition of light. What is more, playing games for a long time give a rise to game addiction, which might lead to violence or mental problems. Hence, they can easily get involved in juvenile crimes.
Since the repercussion of playing games are severe, steps need to be taken to mitigate its negative effects. From my perspective, one of the most practical measures would come from parents and family members. Adults should find the methods to approach their children to control the time they use computers. They should suggest more activities for childen to attend such as playing outdoor sports, hanging out with friends, playing instruments, etc.
To recapitulate, playing computer games have two sides. Because it is onerous to stop children from playing it, people should find appropriate ways to tackle its pernicious disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29810298103 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7696370897 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.798329938 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0952380952 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95238095238 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274570355213 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856951487394 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554055121137 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154222419442 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297061779332 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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