write about the following topic:
Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are benefits of travelling for the travelers?
Write at least 250 words
There is no harm in saying that given topic has grabbed attention owing to its uniqueness. Technology has emerged drastically and due to that our modes of accommodation, eating habits and travelling has been evolved as well. In running days, it is pretty convenient to travel across the globe as technology has made limit distances. These days, people prefer to travel and explore other parts of the world more as compared to the people of half century ago. The evident factor is the ease of transportation and other important factor is the awareness through internet.
To elucidate further, nowadays, people explore the places over the internet, search around the area and plan travelling. One important element here that should not be overlooked is the travelling information channels like NAT GEO Explore etc. These channels provide in depth information to audience about the possible places they can visit. These sorts of documentaries urge people to explore and experience these beautiful places themselves.
There are enormous benefits a person can enjoy due to travelling, first and foremost is the human interaction. People get to meet other people with different cultures and lifestyles. Tourist not only enjoys beautiful scenic view but also get to know about history of such areas. Travelling activity certainly provides tourists a platform to share their culture, language, lifestyle with other people having different attributes; expanding their social circles. Explore potential career possibilities is another prominent advantage.
To recapitulate, it is quite important to spare time and explore the world as it will not only boost our energy but also gives us the medium to compare ourselves with other’s life and realize the blessing of life we enjoy that majority people are deprived of.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 412, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...d explore other parts of the world more as compared to the people of half century ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37543859649 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81263473054 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4224083822 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.133333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148619699687 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482212115079 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410818885627 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833864821804 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505233089442 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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