Dear Jonathan,
Hope you are doing great, hale and hearty. I am writing this letter in excitement to invite you to a reunion party to be held on 20th Jan 2019 at Royal Club, New Delhi. I recently met Abhishek from our school and made this plan for a get together.
So, we have planned to have some fun games to make it more memorable and a contribution from each and everyone amongst us in some solo performance. Additionally, snacks and drinks will be served as the menu is finalized by the party organisers. The most amazing part of this party would be the flashback of all the pictures Abhishek and I have gathered till now from different sources. Even you can also send me some pictures from our school time if you have.
Well, I am working as a software engineer in Wipro company at Hyderabad. I am really glad that I found your address to invite you to the bash. Invite other friends also who are still in your touch.
Looking forward to see you curiously in the party.
Yours lovingly,
Rinki Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...e still in your touch. Looking forward to see you curiously in the party. Yours lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52432432432 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43687282392 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5933826559 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.75 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19636167583 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663666943778 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404755853982 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108219669867 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216669675827 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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