Write a narrative essay about an object (gift/souvenir/possession...) that is meaningful to you
It seems to be believed that everything will be faded and even disappeared by time. Nevertheless, for many people, some special objects that can contain a lot of priceless memories and it cannot be lost over time. For me, that was the first book that I received. To the present, it is still sitting on my bookshelf because I always keep it as my valuable souvenir.
About fifteen years ago, when I turned seven and was coming to go to the first grade. I and my mother were in the books store buying new supplies for the new school year, I accidentally stood in front of the comic bookshelf. I was attracted to it, although I could not understand what did they mean. That may be because the pictures on the book covers were so cool and wonderful. Standing there for a few minutes, I decided to use my saving money to buy a fairy tale book, but I cannot afford to and my mother had to pay instead, so I considered it as a present. Its name is The Wild Swans written by Andersen.
I was excited to go home and read it, but I just actually understood the narration of the book though its images because I did not know how to read it. Later, I tried to read that book by applying what I learned from school. Day in day out, I could entirely read and understood the story. The story was very meaningful and I really loved it.
Up to the present, when I see that book, I still remember the memory that I had with it which is unforgettable. It was a very significant gift to me and it attached to my childhood. I could clearly remember the story in that book because those were the very first words that I could read in my life. Whereas the book was old and faded, the memories that was contained in it will still be there and cannot be lost at least in my mind.
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... The Wild Swans written by Andersen. I was excited to go home and read it, bu...
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...y meaningful and I really loved it. Up to the present, when I see that book,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, whereas, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23076923077 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4401881893 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494082840237 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5869362648 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0437383519414 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0153704322989 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0225851999597 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0280858478554 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121792553006 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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