Technological advances have a substantial influence on most fields in society. There are many debates on both sides of this issue. Although this development has brought us the intense convenience in improving knowledge by the easiest way we ever have, the Internet, others still concur that this manner of learning has its disadvantages. This essay will analyze both sides of the arguable affair.
It cannot be denied that searching information online is truly advantageous. Just take a few minutes to go online by smartphone or computer and find everything you want to know. It is much easier and faster than going to the library and spending hours to find the information. Moreover, by using smartphones and computers, people can flexify their way of working. Studying is more and more accessible when you can study anywhere and anytime you want. The Internet is not only a superb source of information but it also is an ideal connecting tool. Therefore, studying will be much more interesting when you can interact with other people to gain more valuable knowledge from everyone.
There is a strength, there is a limitation. The overuse of the Internet can cause some unexpected problems. One of them is distraction in study. Due to the versatility of the Internet, people can be distracted by social media or games while they are studying so the effect of study will decrease. Furthermore, using smartphones or computers for a long time can lead to some serious health problems and eye problems are a really popular one. Blue light from smartphone and computer screens have a bad effect on the eyes such as myopia, eyestrain, etc. Last but not least, the Internet can diminish people's interaction in society which causes extreme contests against using the Internet.
In conclusion, nothing is perfect and the Internet is not the exception. Beside the countless beneficial advantages that help us a lot in improving and cultivating our knowledge conveniently, the Internet cannot avoid many drawbacks to our health or social interaction. Notwithstanding the ongoing argument in this issue, the development of technology is improving day by day to bring us the best effect of working. So if you know how to use the Internet reasonably, it will deliver us an excellent working assistant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12234042553 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9497594488 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9291453199 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204563130702 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513260829153 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389249056578 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118572261111 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259680687444 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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