Dear Sir
My name is Kathy Brown and I am one of the participants of the one-month training program about to be organized in the UK. Through the program brochure, I learned about various social events that will be organized for the course participants. The program organizers are eagerly looking for active and interested participants who can take up the role of social events organizer. Given my experience in organizing events like plays, musical events, debate competitions, outdoor activities including sports, I feel confident in taking up the role of the events organizer in the UK training program.
I browsed through the brochure but could not find specific information about the responsibilities of the organizer. I request that the exact roles and responsibilities be elucidated. I also request information about the nature of activities that will be organized during the program as this may enable better preparation on my behalf.
I look forward to your response.
Thank you
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e year of 2017, by my organization. if you will select me for this current vac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, you know, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83280158 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0593105399 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32352341643 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122953522329 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121303744032 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185086389925 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143356744175 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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