You have had a class discussion on space exploration. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question:
Should governments spend so much money on space exploration when there are problems on Earth that need to be solved?
Allocation of the federal budget is an extremely intricate process. The decision of the amount to spend over certain part of governance is
a tough decision as it involves taxpayer's money. Many countries allocate a big chunk of their budget for the space exploration and that has been criticised by a large part of population who consider it to be a waste of money. In my opinion, the government should increase the expenditure on space projects and in this essay, I succinctly describe some of the issues that were discovered by space missions and how solving them helped people.
The satellites, with their advanced imaging technology, accurately map the atmosphere of our planet. The ozone layer is a blanket of gas that forms a protective covering of our earth, preventing the harmful sun-rays (termed as ultraviolet or UV rays). from reaching the earth. If the human body is directly exposed to UV rays, it can lead to diseaseskin cancer. The satellites picked up the damage to the ozone layer and scientists were able to find the cause and develop solutions to solve this problem before the damage became irreparable.
Moreover, aerial imagery of glaciers, revealed their melting at a rate faster than they are being replenished, due to rise in global average temperature. Glaciers supply fresh water to many rivers and millions of people rely on these rivers as their only source of potable water. If this continues, rivers would dry, causing widespread famines. Thus, timely discovery of this problem has enabled researchers to bring this to the public attention, which forced many governments to enact laws to curb pollution.
Another reason that makes space exploration necessary is because satellites are able to map the demographic of the Earth from the higher altitudes very well. These help the organisations to map the migration patterns which can be used by the governments to maintain the availability of resources.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate the fact that investing financially in space exploration helps in solving the problems on the earth.Instead of considering it as a waste of money, it should be seen as instrument to help mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11204481793 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8972334228 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8816553481 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181971494195 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05063535212 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529696949662 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958486383228 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624954239513 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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