You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit?
In this day and age, most of the populace likes to travel and visit places rich in culture. If I am given a chance to visit a certain country that would be Canada.
To start with, Canada have a lot of picturesque scenery like the Niagara falls, Dempster highway, and Abraham lake. Those places would lessen my stress and give me a feeling of contentment that I have visited those wonderful places in that country.
Another, is that Canada is one of those countries that accepts foreign nationals very well. Since that their nation treats every one equal no matter what your gender, color, and religion. This is one of the main reason why most of the tourist choose this country because of it’s treatment to it’s countrymen and foreigner alike. So most of the expatriates tend to migrate to this country because they are open to foreign visitors and they are hospitable when they are meeting new people.
Moreover, being multicultural is one of Canada’s best asset because of most of it’s population are foreigner with different ideology. For example, in Winnipeg most of it’s inhabitants are Filipino who are very jolly, cheerful, and friendly. They rich in culture and history so most of the time Filipinos tend to tell stories about their ancestors and cook some delectable dishes.
In summary, Canada is one of the country that are peaceful and have a lot of spectacular scenery. They are also multicultural and equal on how they treat their people and foreign visitors.
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| 2019-07-14 | Saira Faiz | 56 | view |
| 2019-02-10 | H1TCH0130 | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ravel and visit places rich in culture. If I am given a chance to visit a certain ...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Canada) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...uld be Canada. To start with, Canada have a lot of picturesque scenery like the N...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in summary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97233201581 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61412179716 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4807622479 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198809441691 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766314106576 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603325775919 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121724968196 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065818025566 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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