You have organized to go on holiday with you friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
•Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
•Explain why you must change your plans.
•Suggest alternative arrangements.
Dear John,
It’s been long since we last met but I haven’t forgotten the wonderful moments that we spent together in college. As you are aware that, for catching up, I had arranged a get together at my place during Easter holidays but now I’m afraid I have to reschedule this arrangement because of an urgent matter at office.
I was very excited and looking forward to meeting you and have already organized the list of places that we need to visit during vacation. Also, I have shortlisted the famous food places as I know that how much you like eating.
Actually, my name is included in the team building event that is organized by my company in Thailand and it is coinciding with our plans. The human resource department has already cancelled my Easter holidays for this purpose.
Let’s meet up during summers as the weather over here will be perfect to travel and visiting various places. Also, a circus is coming to the town so we will have fun.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best of luck.
James.
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| 2019-01-27 | insidematrix | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74175824176 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49804294852 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675824175824 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8821464595 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164265919256 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647684505154 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611533474381 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965355375027 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663765386798 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.