You need to seek admission for a short course
write a letter to the admission officer
-Why this course
-How your background knowledge is related to this
-Why this institute is important
Dear Sir/Mada,
I am writing to inquire about admission in SAP certification.
I have selected this course because my company has recently implemented this software and I am required to work on it. And a lot of large organizations are adopting this software too so this certification will bring better chances of career advancement.
I am a certified professional accountant with a Masters degree in Applied Accounting. I will be specializing in the Financial aspect of SAP as it will enhance my skills for accountancy. I also have two years of experience in operating this software so I am familiar with the basics.
The reason for choosing your institute is that it is considered as the top place for this certification. Most of the multinational corporations recognize this prestigious institute. It will definitely be a positive addition to my CV.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ahsan Abid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...will enhance my skills for accountancy. I also have two years of experience in op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37596735108 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3291440301 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2727272727 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6363636364 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238857593897 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082515664797 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688141727147 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116711424366 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699506266895 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.