You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the trend of studying through digital devices is common. Infact, in many education institutes; students are using such devices in their classrooms rather than books and assignments for the purpose of education. Although there are some advantages to this educational enhancement but the drawbacks of using tablets and laptops should also be not neglected.
To start with, lets look at the positive side of this aspect. Firstly, learning can become more fun and efficient through digital sources. These days, students are easily engaged with electronic gadgets, which gives the uses of tablets and laptops for studying an upper hand comparing to the use of printed materials. Furthermore, many software programs, for instance, are specially developed to provide education to children in a fun and interesting manner. Additionally, through this, many students develop good writing speed on keypads of laptops and use of softwares, which could be useful for their future prospects.
Nevertheless, there are some consequences of using such devices as well, especially in terms of children health. Those students, who are constantly engaging themselves to laptop screens can develop weakness in their eyes. Furthermore, many health specialists has warned that using bright screens for reading and learning is not only bad for their eyesight but also for their overall body development as well. For example, in a recent study, it has shown that those children, who were using laptops as a source of studying has insignificant brain developement as compared to the students who used printed material like books and articles. Therefore, using such sources for long terms has shown some negative points as well.
To conclude, the use of digital devices such as laptops and tablets can be useful but only if it used as additional source of education materials. Furthermore, printed resources such as books and assignments should not be taken away from classes as they are equally important too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4076433121 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79132996664 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531847133758 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0311005976 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201844878239 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072849105766 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535522877829 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135074247885 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197134427601 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.