Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
These days, people are migrating abroad in large numbers. Many people often relocate to seek better lifestyle than there home countries. This colonization process has several effects on the society. In this essay, we will discuss the reason behind the trend of immigration as well as its affects.
To start with, many millenial immigrate abroad in the hope of better future livelihood. Nowadays, many students opt for a university in abroad for their further education. This is because, higher qualification and work experience in foreign countries can have a positive impact on their career. Many of them, choose to stay back in foreign countries after their studies, rather than going home. Furthermore, many people, for example, believe that by living abroad they can earn more wealth and secure their future compared to their origin land.
Nevertheless moving away from home country is not an easy task. It can lead to many hurdles in their path. Firstly, settling down in a new society can be difficult; as it can make most of newcomers home- sick. Furthermore, leaving behind family and cultures can be quite daunting. For instance, people often complaint after moving to a new country that they miss their acquaintance and feeling nostalgic. Additionally, studies has shown that many newly arrived people has had gone back to their home countries as they were not able to adapt into new culture and communities.
To conclude, immigrating to a new country can leads to many positive outcomes. However, it can be a challenging journey and it can also affects the change in living standards in the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...re compared to their origin land. Nevertheless moving away from home country is not an...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the newcomers') or simply say ''most newcomers''.
Suggestion: most of the newcomers; most newcomers
...ociety can be difficult; as it can make most of newcomers home- sick. Furthermore, leaving behind...
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Line 13, column 137, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...e a challenging journey and it can also affects the change in living standards in the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14716981132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67537855441 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5758099056 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141912766068 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539095395732 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585183831819 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108831820039 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640876278911 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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