You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Parents are essential for teaching their children the difference between right and wrong. Some agree with this view, whereas other disagree. In my opinion, I do believe that parent are the best teachers, teaching the young generation the way of living their life successfully.
Some individuals opine that parents are not able to teach their children the necessary skills and expertise requires in building a successful future. Moreover, they are not able to give the practical knowledge and experience to the young generation about the work life and company which is vital for them to construct a prosperous professional life, they can only have this erudition from universities and schools. To elucidate, colleges aid children in developing this listening, speaking and presentation skills required for a job which cannot be taught by parents.
However, parents are the first point of contact of children. Mothers and fathers are the role model of children. They teach their children moral and ethical values which help them to become a good citizen. Moreover, parent are the devoted teachers and will educate their kids with full enthusiasm, making them understand the importance of responsible nature thus, building their overall personality which will prepare them for future endeavours. Additionally, Young individuals learn strong communication skills from their parents, which aid them in all aspects of life in terms of sharing their ideas, viewpoints, feelings and emotions, which cannot be acquired from the outside world To exemplify, a child learns to communicate with others, have a calm and peaceful nature, understand the importance of relation and value of money from their parents.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that parents are indispensable in making their children socially, physically, mentally, psychologically and ethically strong. They are the best teachers imparting expertise, values and morals in the young generations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lues and morals in the young generations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55183946488 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88619655177 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.1750037481 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0744032598931 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341601406657 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247955285236 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597784801768 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316355609522 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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