You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home to work, shopping and education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traffic congestion issue becomes increasingly popular in metropolitan cities where a large number of population reside. People used to commute office, university every day. It is often argued that this issue can be resolved by limiting their travelling but in my opinion, this is not merely the option, supplementary measures are also available.
Apparently, advancementn of technology made life easier. A lot of potential hours can be saved because of internet facility. Civilian need not to rush for their workplace, malls, supermarkets for those task that can be carried online. For instance, the availability of video conferencing assist to conduct business meeting, also abundance of choices are available for online shopping. Beside saving of time it would help to reduce the traffic issues to some extent and furthermore reduce air and noise pollution.
Despite some benefits from curtailing the need of commutation of population, the idea that it is merely the solution is preposterous. There are certain task that can be performed only on the workplace. For example, nurses, doctors can provide their service in hospital only, basic education can be provided in school in order to teach various skills. Usage of private car voraciously need to be replaced by public conveyance such as metro trains, city bus. Also, the availability of traffic in charge and setting up of effective rules will assist to overcome this persistent issue.
The essay argued that reducing the need for travelling not an effective and permanent solution. In my opinion, these explanations are slightly feasible, however, promote and usage of public transportation is entirely justified solution.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-09 | Prachi Agrawal | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ly popular in metropolitan cities where a large number of population reside. People used to commu...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rush'?
Suggestion: rush
...of internet facility. Civilian need not to rush for their workplace, malls, supermarket...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tasks'?
Suggestion: tasks
...tion is preposterous. There are certain task that can be performed only on the workp...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47328244275 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94939151689 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637404580153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6106101542 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153469057308 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495398157809 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415638453991 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904688298665 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158247625066 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.