You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend
- Expressing your apology
- Explaining why you couldn’t meet
- Suggesting when to meet later
Arranging colleagues decide
Dear Peter,
I am writing to sincerely apologise for not arranging a meeting with you despite the fact that I was in your city last week. I am really sorry that I was not able to make it as we have not seen each other for ages and I miss you a lot.
To be honest, I thought that I would have enough free time to go out with you. However, as it was a business trip I had to give lectures about a piece of new equipment in our branch office. In addition, the head of the branch asked me to go on a field trip with topographers’ team to provide a demonstration of the equipment work in practice.
Actually, I was totally occupied by the training of my colleagues that I even did not have a minute to sit down and relax.
Anyway, I think that we will definitely meet in a couple of weeks because I am coming for my sister wedding and you are invited as well. Let us meet on 8th September prior to the wedding and go together or if you have other plans I will see you at the celebration.
Please, let me know what you will decide.
Take care,
Maria
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot have a minute to sit down and relax. Anyway, I think that we will definitely ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lans I will see you at the celebration. Please, let me know what you will decide...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at you will decide. Take care, Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, however, if, really, so, well, as to, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.125 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45537087908 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2899515252 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210654766122 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077384205425 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816394812343 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106280929635 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793144581192 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot have a minute to sit down and relax. Anyway, I think that we will definitely ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lans I will see you at the celebration. Please, let me know what you will decide...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at you will decide. Take care, Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, however, if, really, so, well, as to, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.125 5.12529762239 80% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45537087908 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2899515252 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210654766122 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077384205425 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816394812343 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106280929635 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793144581192 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.