You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In you letter,
a. say who you are.
b. give details about the accident.
c. suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about the minor accident, I had in your supermarket.
I am a regular visitor of your supermarket for past one year. I am living in Green Leaf apartment, located in the same street, just opposite your shop. My weekly shopping would never end without swiping my credit card at your shop.
Last Sunday, I came to buy vegetables at 10:30 AM. While i was searching for onion, I hit the fruit box placed in the pathway. Since i was carrying basket full of vegetables, I fell down unable to balance myself.
This kind of accidents can be avoided if we regularly clear the intrusions in the pathway by having dedicated employees for this. We cannot let such type of accidents happen to the elderly persons which can become fatal sometimes. Hope, not just me, anyone would not have similar incident in future in your supermarket.
I look forward to hear from you.
yours faithfully,
Anand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of your supermarket for past one year. I am living in Green Leaf apartment, loca...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me to buy vegetables at 10:30 AM. While i was searching for onion, I hit the frui...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... fruit box placed in the pathway. Since i was carrying basket full of vegetables,...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... in your supermarket. I look forward to hear from you. yours faithfully, Anand...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... I look forward to hear from you. yours faithfully, Anand.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 167.0 315.596192385 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82634730539 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57895509044 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700598802395 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1647098813 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1666666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13188733224 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451034232095 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610132093848 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878413600189 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699986726113 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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