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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... risk and explore new things, there is a controversy among people, some people ho...
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Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...lder people are more suitable because of fruitful experience they have, on contra...
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Line 1, column 486, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ful experience they have, on contrast, I prefer the young people, since their s...
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Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... I prefer the young people, since their sense of confidence and enterprise and t...
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Line 1, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nfidence and enterprise and the positive attitude towards failure. To begin wit...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e teenagers are relatively confident and ambitious to research unknown fields and...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to thinking'.
Suggestion: accustomed to thinking
...o achieve them. However, old people are accustomed to think too much and dont dare to try new thing...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...le are accustomed to think too much and dont dare to try new things which will defi...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...d dont dare to try new things which will definitely restrain their creativity and...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...yun, the most successful business man in China, construct his company in his twen...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...king risk. In additionally, no one can avoid failure during the process of expl...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...d to be positive is very important. When encountering with challenge and failure,...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...egative while young people always can be positive and reflect on the failure to ...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...young people always can be positive and reflect on the failure to ensure they wi...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...re to ensure they will not make the same mistake again. Take Edison as a instanc...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the same mistake again. Take Edison as a instance, during the process of invent...
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Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...he same mistake again. Take Edison as a instance, during the process of inventin...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...tance, during the process of inventing a bibe, He failed unaccountable times, h...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... process of inventing a bibe, He failed unaccountable times, however his confid...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...enting a bibe, He failed unaccountable times, however his confidence never wane...
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Line 5, column 604, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'maintains'.
Suggestion: maintains
...ven after thousands of failure he still maintain a positive attitude and finally he succ...
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Line 5, column 648, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
...tain a positive attitude and finally he succeed. Thus, since young people are more posi...
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Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... when confronting with difficult problem , however I think it is the sense of ente...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rprise and confidence that play the most important role in the exploring of our w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05043859649 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76897520537 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475877192982 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5222020189 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.9375 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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