In 20 years will be fewer cars in use than are today.
Nowadays people not only buy a car for its primary use as transportation, but also for an personal fulfillment. Even though some people believed that we are getting more conscious about environmental issues linked to the use of cars, and that new notion can decrease the number of this transportation source in the cities, I do not agree with the statement.
To drastically decrease the number of cars in use in a near future, the cities would have to offer a much bigger and complete public transportation. Including train lines, buses better routes, and fleets and subway lines covering larger areas, yet, the biggest urban centers cannot corporate all this improvement in their consolidate spaces.
In addiction, the modern population are getting more selfish everyday and encouraged by the social media trend, a car does not only means a more comfortable way to go to work and come back home. Having a car can also mean freedom, privacy, success and especially, social acceptance. Unfortunately, for many people none of this feelings can be acquired by using public transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ary use as transportation, but also for an personal fulfillment. Even though some ...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the number of this transportation source in the cities, I do not agree with the s...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ern population are getting more selfish everyday and encouraged by the social media tren...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...social media trend, a car does not only means a more comfortable way to go to work an...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... Unfortunately, for many people none of this feelings can be acquired by using publi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13483146067 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00613772677 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.524837075471 130% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5081907344 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120008542775 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580880987555 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353272483981 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787944598903 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176344016924 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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