Since many years ago, when technology was not improved, people used to have more face-to-face communications rather than emails or telephones. Just in some cases that they were far from each other, they used to send letters. Then telephone and mobile were invented. Now everything has changed. Technology has been improved. Face-to-face communication almost has been replaced by phone, email; and text message. Communication through phone calls or internet has some pros and cons.
The advantage is that life communication has become easier. For example, since many years ago, my uncle went to a foreign country to continue his studing there. On that time there were no phone or emails. So my grandfather used to write him a letter to keep in touch with him. But now we can talk to each other through a phone call or by sending email whenever we want. In addition, we can send pictures to each other or we can talk online face-to-face through some mobile applications.
On contray there are some people who avoid face-to-face communication, since telephone or cellphone has come, which has made them far from each other. Also a lot of misunderstanding may occur. Because people may not be able to see each other's facial expressions which plays an important role in having a good communication. People can have effect on each other by facial expressions, eye contact; and voice tone. For example, I had a friend. We used to talk to each other mostly by text messages. So we didn't used to hear and see each other's voices and facial expressions, which leaded to some misunderstanding and then we broke up. We used to be mad at each other for small and not important reasons.
Likewise, this technology has made us careless about our grandparents. For instance, I know some one who rarely goes to meet her grandmother. She usually call her instead of visiting her and I know her grand mother lives alone; she needs some one go there and sit in front of her; she indeed enjoy having tea and talking about different issues.
To sum up, communication is a specific tool which has been changed through years. Beside all the pros and cons, I agree with the statement. Face-to-face communication is much better than other types of communication. Overall as technology is getting improved, we have to reconcil ourselves with that. The important point is that It is vital to know in which situations is better to have face-to-face communications.
For example, I usually keep in touch with my families and friends who are abroad by phone or emails. On the other hand I allocate some of my time to visit my uncles, aunts; and grand mother to make them happy.
In my view, we should manage our time and find the best way of communication in each situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hich has made them far from each other. Also a lot of misunderstanding may occur. Be...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...so a lot of misunderstanding may occur. Because people may not be able to see each othe...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ch other mostly by text messages. So we didnt used to hear and see each others voices...
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Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... our grandparents. For instance, I know some one who rarely goes to meet her grandmother...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'calls'.
Suggestion: calls
...es to meet her grandmother. She usually call her instead of visiting her and I know ...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ere and sit in front of her; she indeed enjoy having tea and talking about different ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, talking about, in my view, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87250520526 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492600422833 0.524837075471 94% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6676039308 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.21875 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.78125 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230264096534 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641701478156 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834512576519 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114628673047 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104130733286 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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