Sometimes, Life can be very demanding and the things you have to deal with in life can have a huge impact on your energy levels and the achievement of your success. Some people think that success comes from taking risks and chances but; in my view, success results from good planning for some specific reasons.
First, time can be managed. For example, I remember the days that I had to study for my final exams; I used to balance my time and allocate different parts of books to specific time. So, my stress was reduced and I could also review the book at the end of the day.
Second, by planning to reach to our goal, we can review the steps better. For example, when I used to work on my thesis in university, every steps were planned and scheduled very well; I also used my professor's experiences. I used to review all the steps of my job in blocks of time occasionally. So I was less overwhelmed when the deadline was going to be finished.
In conclusion, although sometimes we need to take risks to reach to our goals in life, careful planning is one of the important factors to achieve success. For example, I know someone who used to be just a simple employee. He had a passion for becomming successful and getting promoted in his life. He was a real risk taker. Once, he decided to start his own bussiness. First of all, he planned for what he wanted to do; in addition he used some of his friends experiences. Then, he took a big risk and stated his new job. Now he has become a rich and successful entrepreneur. He said to me, "without good planning, I would never reach to my aim".
So; in my view, although sometimes we should take risks, careful planning is much more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in his life. He was a real risk taker. Once he decided to start his own bussiness. ...
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Line 4, column 588, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...sful entrepreneur. He said to me, 'with out good planning, I would never reach to M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44551282051 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55683063372 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8188792968 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214910538725 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061752368955 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951887816016 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119965052708 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141166483047 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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