Most people are in the pursuit of happiness. Although money can make you happier, when your basic needs are met, it doesn't make you happier anymore. Because you will be adapted. I believe that we should allocate our money on various resources. There are some reasons that demonstrate the validity of my opinion.
First, spending money on valuable things which last for a long time is a good choice for those who don't earn much. Therefore, they can save money for rainy days. Forexample, there are some people who don't have alot of income, then saving money or buying valuable and long last things such as: jewelries or golds, make this possible for them to promote themselves in life. There are some priorities for these people. They can go on holiday whenever they can afford it in the future. For instance, how are these people able to pay for hospitalization or pharmacy to get their medicines if they just spend their money on experiences?
Second, sometimes spending money on long last things is worth it. For instance, buying cellphones, cars; and house is really useful and vital in our lives.
In contrast, There is a belief that life is too short and it is rational to use it in a way that always makes you happy. They think that happiness is the best indicator of the health of a society. A good illustration for this statement is my brother who believes he should enjoy every moments of his life beside doing his best in his job. In his opinion, after a hard work he needs to squash all the stresses and complicated thoughts. It makes him fresh and prepares him to embrace the problems and preclude the obstacles.
In my veiw, both statements are considerable. The point is that ; according to the situation, we should spend our money in a good and suitable way. I remember the time that I wanted to buy the car that I loved, but, I didn't have much money to buy that. Even, I didn't want to borrow some money from my parents. So I decided to wait for the right time. After working for a while and saving my money, finally I could afford it.
On the other hand, it is also good to spend your money on an experience if you have the chance. It brings us an oppurtunity to be together. We all are human and indeed feel happy by being together and having fun. We can creat good memories with each other and later, we can reminisce those good time that we had in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47356321839 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40290799612 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0602621808 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5357142857 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250086483133 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624892097847 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651057189763 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125296557155 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381582896726 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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