Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people may have different opinion for how to achieve success in their life.Some people might think that success in life can be achieved from taking risks or chances. However,Personally, I believe that success comes in their life with careful planning.For me , this means to achieve success in life, people have to set decent activities, very good objectives and have to set goals to fit for that success.
First of all, I think that people have to make plan for doing decent activities.Among many important ladder for achieving success in life , listing of activities first then doing accordingly is very crucial. I find that,it is important to do right thing in right place.We can imagine that without decent performance it is perhaps impossible to achieve any type of success. So , for our desired success in life , we have to face it in the real world and do it really rather than day dreaming.
In addition to planning of decent activities, they need to set the objective to reach in certain goal first.Like setting excellent bottom level minor activities, we have to set middle level activities well in hand to reach in certain goal.For example, if we have to graduate from college with excellence result , we have to know the syllabus first then have to prepare themselves in that matter and develop fluency on them and master on it. As a result of hard work, at last we can get desired result.
Finally, in combination of planning of proper activities and setting right objectives, we have to think about the outstanding goal to achieve the desired success. Even-though goal setting is crucial, without doing action in the field, it is perhaps impossible to achieve it. For example, my friend Sita did excellent job by completing her degree with her application of her plan as she thought.She made it possible because of her determination towards the achievement of her success by really doing her planned activities in timely manner in the actual condition.
By way of conclusion, in considering success in life, I have explored some issues like planning from the very initial level means we have to consider from setting very small activities first.Then we need to think slightly upper level things such as setting suitable objectives and then adding for certain reliable goals.Thus , we can achieve our goal with determined and real application of these plan in real our life.Considering these above mentioned facts I would have to say that planning is and application is very significant for making success in life.
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Sentence: Thus , we can achieve our goal with determined and real application of these plan in real our life.
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