Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally ,I agree with the assertion that games are as important for adults as they are for children.For me, it means games keep mentally sharp, physically fit and help to make more friends
To begin with, I find that games are always important for adult to keep mentally alert and clever.Games are such activities that they help to make our mind cell active and strong.When these cells become active and play a part to make alert towards the things to care take by themselves.As a personal example, I am an adult now and I am able to keep my mind alert all the time because of the game I play in regular basis.I Find that Table- tennis and volleyball are my best games ever I play.
In addition to mentally alert and sharp, we play game to maintain good physical status.I feel that games are the sources of fun in our life. Playing activity always help to make enjoyable life.Because of game I play , my physical status is well maintained.When I am busy do not get time to play I feel lethargic and less active.
Finally, along with maintaining sharp mental capacity and good physical condition, game is a good way of making new friends.I am a kind of person always like to make new friends which I can do playing games.Games are not only helping me to make new friends, it also help me to strengthen my relationship with them in person.For example, I have make many friends by playing and helped me a lot to spare my extra time by talking with them and getting help when in need.
In considering game and adult, I have explored that game make adult to maintain mentally sharp and physically fit and also help to make new friends.These factors lead me personally believe that game are very important for adult as do children
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Sentence: Because of game I play , my physical status is well maintained.When I am busy do not get time to play I feel lethargic and less active.
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Suggestion: Refer to busy and do
Sentence: For example, I have make many friends by playing and helped me a lot to spare my extra time by talking with them and getting help when in need.
Description: A verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to have and make
Sentence: In considering game and adult, I have explored that game make adult to maintain mentally sharp and physically fit and also help to make new friends.These factors lead me personally believe that game are very important for adult as do children.
Description: The fragment game make adult is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 324 350
No. of Characters: 1382 1500
No. of Different Words: 143 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.243 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.265 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.266 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.344 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.496 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.763 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.226 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5