The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different slides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping to conclusions. After all, each and every question requires a careful deliberation in that there are always multiple variables to a truth. Even though some may adamantly believe that being capable of creating a lot of friends is more important than maintaining friendships for a long time with a small number of people, I strongly believe such opinion lacks coherence to some extent. In my humble opinion, having a good friend for a long time is more favorable than making friends easily due to the following reasons.
First and foremost, having good friendships for a long period of time can engender a myriad of advantages. the main reason behind this rationale is that most people find their friends an essential part of their lives. In other words, individuals rely too much on their friends to do a lot of tasks. In addition to this, people spend most of their free time with their close friends. To illustrate more thoroughly, My uncle Jack was studying at the University of Jordan and he didn't have a lot of friends from the University. However, he was always hanging with his middle school friends. At one day, I asked him about his University friends. he advised me to not make a lot of friends because old friends are real friends and you can depend on them. In contrast, creating a lot of friends could be bad owing to the fact most people these days can't distinguish between real and fake friends. All in all, we can't and shouldn't overlook the upsides of having a small group of trustworthy friends.
On top of this, creating a lot of friends nowadays can result in unfavorable ramifications. In the eyes of many people in present-day society, most individuals have a lot of fake friends. Meaning that people need a favor from others in order to become friends. Moreover, creating a large group of friends would be confusing because people will face difficulties to choose their best friends. A great example of this would be, My brother Ahmad was working at a software company and he was friendly with most people there. However, one day he got reported for wasting his time with others instead of working. He didn't know who did this because he was friendly with most people there. But people in current days are looking competitively for each other. Long story short, it's clear as day to me creating a large number of friends can be detrimental.
In summation, yes, it's virtually impossible to provide a completely satisfying answer to an open-ended question. Although the jury may be out in this given essay, we can come to a mutual agreement that the ability to maintain friendships with a small group of people is more essential than creating a lot of friends due to the reasons and details mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...aining friendships for a long time with a small number of people, I strongly believe such opinion...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ost, having good friendships for a long period of time can engender a myriad of advantages. th...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...me can engender a myriad of advantages. the main reason behind this rationale is th...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ying at the University of Jordan and he didnt have a lot of friends from the Universi...
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Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...asked him about his University friends. he advised me to not make a lot of friends...
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Line 3, column 844, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...wing to the fact most people these days cant distinguish between real and fake frien...
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Line 3, column 907, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n real and fake friends. All in all, we cant and shouldnt overlook the upsides of ha...
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Line 3, column 916, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...d fake friends. All in all, we cant and shouldnt overlook the upsides of having a small ...
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Line 5, column 611, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...time with others instead of working. He didnt know who did this because he was friend...
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Line 5, column 802, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... short, its clear as day to me creating a large number of friends can be detrimental. In summ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, after all, in addition, in contrast, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2357.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75201612903 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64203613455 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493951612903 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6680875974 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.28 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.84 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29539463642 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786798242297 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707183414222 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197663237258 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538796239093 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.