AD: TV and movies have more negative impacts
Speaking of the effects that movies and television have on youngsters, the answers can vary differently from individual to individual. Some suggest that they affect young people in positive ways like valuable educational tools, while others believe that they pose negative impacts on people. In my opinion, the risks of television and movies outweigh their benefits.
To begin with, I believe that television makes young people less active. mentally as well as physically. Watching television hardly requires effort and energy for people. We just need to move our fingers on the controllers to change the channels. Furthermore, all the time we spend sitting in front of the television is time we aren't spending moving around or doing exercise. It's time we aren't spending reading books, or interacting with our friends. It's time we aren't exercising our bodies and minds in meaningful ways.
Second, another effect of movies and television is that it makes people less sensitive to violence. There often is some violence and murders in tv series and movies. Nevertheless, despite the fact that all of them are unreal and several dead characters will probably end up relived, people might gradually take them for granted and become less sensitive to them in reality due to the increasing amount of them. For example, youngsters' minds aren't generally mature enough to process such information and eventually misunderstand it. This might damage their self-development and cause them to have bad behavior when they grow up. Therefore, I strongly agree that movies and television have more negative impacts.
Last but not least, both of them can stifle the imagination. Since all of the stories in movies and dramas are written in advance and told for us, people don't need to imagine how the plots might go on, or how the characters or places will look like. Well goes a saying, "imagination is your superpower." In my opinion, imagination is fundamental for young people's development. For example, without imagination, they probably will have difficulty bringing out several creative ideas or proposals in their jobs. Furthermore, my personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was young, instead of thinking of something different to do, I usually just sit down and let the television do the entertainment for me in my leisure time since I can turn on the television easily. Therefore, when I grew up, I still couldn't find any activities that I'm interested in and could only continue to spend time watching television, which is often viewed as meaningless activity. Thus, I strongly believe that movies and television will harm young people's behavior.
To sum up, television and movies are a significant influence in modern life, and they can be valuable in some ways. Nonetheless, from what I've mentioned above, both of them have strong negative impacts on youngsters' behavior, encouraging young people to misunderstand violence and to be inactive and unimaginative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, speaking of, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2512.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22245322245 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96921967693 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534303534304 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4199755427 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96153846154 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154897635722 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448179408079 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722460398177 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103913316829 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685398968884 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.