Advertisements
In the era of global business world, various different types of companies are competing with each other in order to gain popularity. For this purpose, they try to endorse their products through advertising so that they could make more and more people to buy their products. No doubt, advertisements are indispensable part of marketing. In this regard, some people believe that advertising is very helpful and improves their lives, while others think advertisements do not really supply any advantage to them. I concur with the second statement, because I think that most of the advertisements do not really offers much truthful information and manipulates the customers.
To begin with, the main reason why advertisements are not very helpful is that commercial often make false claims or tell misleading information. They only let you know enough information to get you buy the products. So, it is not a good idea to believe everything that is being shown. My mother’s recent experience is a good case in point, she saw a commercial of cooking knives that cut meat just like soft butter. But as she received the knives through mail, she found that knives had not been sharpened at all. The advertisement didn’t mentioned that knives will be unsharpened.
Second, the frequency with which these advertises are being telecasted on televisions or whether touts on streets and salesperson trying to sell their products, all these are just trying to manipulate people to persuade them to buy their items. These seep deep into your mind and make you think that you really need to have that thing. For instance, when we go out for grocery shopping, sales person tries to make you buy new items, it may for its different flavor or packaging. As a result, we cannot resist the temptation and end up buying things that we do not really require. These advertisements try to manipulate our psychology and we all fall for these gimmicks turning into impulsive buyers.
In conclusion, I would reaffirm my opinion that these advertisements provides no good benefits to us rather they try to exploit us while endorsing their products and persuades us to buy unnecessary products by providing misleading information. Therefore, due to aforementioned reasons advertisements encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.
- Face to face communication is better than other modes of communications Do you agree or not 76
- One should travel only during young age Do you agree or not 66
- Importance of water consumption 76
- Does being a successful person is to earm a lot of money 73
- It is sometimes better to hide truth or always remain honest 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...rpened at all. The advertisement didn’t mentioned that knives will be unsharpened. Secon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, you know, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09448818898 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96344405635 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561679790026 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0984348477 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28922863609 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111310240859 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112011631854 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193445575064 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887404955929 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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