After they complete their university studies, some students live in their home towns, others live in different towns or cities. Which do you think is better living in your hometown or living in different towns or cities?
There are different time periods in any person’s life which he should make some crucial decisions in each of them. Generally, university studies and a young adult’s decision after that is so much important. Some people tend to stay in their hometown and continue their life in the same place. However, some others like to experience a new adventure in a new environment. There are some reasons that make me believe a new experience can help you in your future life totally.
First, anybody must seek for an occupation after graduation. Mainly, most of young people return to their hometown after their university studying. But, recently by cities and states development and infrastructure’s enhancement, young people try to seize the best opportunities they find anywhere even if it was somewhere far from their hometown. Since, a good job with decent salary is beginning of anybody’s future which you will thrive only if it was built correctly and strongly.
Secondly, young people who live with their parents like to have much more independency after a certain age. This encourages them to leave their hometown mostly after finishing high school or their academic studying. Living in another city may help you find your path in this world and experience adulthood life in a whole new condition. Even some parents force their children to live their hometown themselves to show them that they should accept a number of responsibilities when they become older.
Also, finding your future in a fresh place can be productive in so many other cases. For example, you can meet many new people with different behaviors and cultures in new cities other than your own hometown. Surprisingly, it may lead to finding a nice person who you may have feelings for him or her whom you never meet if you stayed in your own city. So, it can change your love life too.
In conclusion, people make variety of decisions during their life. Some of these have major effect in your future like leaving your hometown or staying there after your graduation. I think meeting new places during life can be life changing if any person chooses it wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, even so, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99722222222 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76797018601 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6050201475 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.95 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293616549686 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903643330607 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572388920494 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164056688716 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074732718476 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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