: agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
The way we behave is very important. Our behaviour can influences people around us and has strong effect in our relationship. Some people may disagree with that different clothes influence the way people behave but others agree with this. In my view people behave differently when they wear different clothes for two reasons.
The main reason is that the clothes we wear have effect in our self-confidence. People usually judge you through your clothes and this bias cause them to behave differently. If you wear proper clothes, they behave you friendly. Other wise, they think biasly about you and dont tend to interact you. For example, Tim said when he was poor, he lived in slut. He didn't have enough money for buying clothes. They had problem in supplying the nessesory things of life such as food, water. He stated that always people ignore them and behave them in a inapropprate way. He studied hard to become a doctor. Now he has a god life and his way of wearing change. he said that people behave him much more better than before. As you can see, people wouldn't have behave him well if he weren't wear good clothes.
Another reason is that some jobs have uniform and expect you to behave in a proper way for your job. Although you will be a funny person in your personal life but if you are a police officer and wear his uniform that needs you to be a little serious and have discipline. For instance, my older brother is a police officer. He is so funny and always makes us to laugh. His room was usually messy and he didn't care a lot about discipline. When he decided to become a police officer he started to go training class for it. Gradually he changed and learned how serious he should be. One day i went to his work to visited him. He really treated me in a different way of home. After he came back home I surprisingly asked him about his different behaviour. He explains me that when he wears his uniform he should behave in serious way that delinquents did not do crime. This taught me that when you wear special clothes of some jobs, you should behave proper for that job.
In sum, though some may oppose the claim, I agree that people behave different in different clothes. That can be because of your self-confidence or the obligation that a job wants you special way of behavior. Every person should attend to his clothes because it is the way you introduce your self.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53225806452 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39262055945 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470046082949 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2522456816 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4516129032 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51612903226 5.45110844103 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232904002412 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755978777203 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842753703248 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213599631103 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112255047501 0.0645574589148 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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