Agree or disagree? All University students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
By and large, it's established beyond doubt that in such a sophisticated modern era each person should be expert in a specific major. Personally stated, I am of the conviction that it is not nessesary that making people to take some unrelated courses like history. In what follows, I will delve into the crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
One compelling reason corroborating my idea is that an individual goes to the university to gain some specific skills. Broadly speaking, general courses should be required to take in general school period, not at the univeristy. Because at the higher education levels, students like to focus on some more related courses to their major. To illustrate what was stated above a vivid example is put forth; During passing my bachelor degree in the major of computer science at the university, since I had a goal to be a full stack programmer, then I liked taking onle some courses in various subjects related to my filed. And I didn't have any free time to pass some general courses like history or the like.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that each person should take courses based on his/her interests such as sport, music or art. Indeed, taking a general course should be optional. The noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics revealed by a recently conducted research in our country show that if students have right their courses based on their interests, they will probably those fiels after his/her universities as a hoby or even in a professional stage.
By pursuing the above paragraphs, one can infer that students should take their courses freely. For the sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating: first, in universities students should take consentration on specific courses; second, students should be allowed to take general courses based on their interests fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, broadly speaking, in general, such as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13071895425 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80779627765 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3000814325 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306485955557 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119199776569 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725953125941 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196735418582 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719105801643 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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