All university students should be required to take history class no matter what their field are.(agree or disagree)
It goes without saying that the courses that should be passed by the students in university can shape their future. That is why students try to choose their major meticulously to pass the courses which are pertinent to their interests. With this in mind, it is quite expected to think about the courses that should be mandatory in university. On idea of prominence in this regard is that all students in university have to take history class unconditionally. I am against this idea because of some reasons, among three of which are more significant.
To begin with, they can allocate their time to pass a course which is related to their career. In today's society, in order to find a better and prestigious job you should be quite skilled in your major, and it is crystal clear that one would not be adroit in one major if he does not pass the related courses. For example, I was forced to attend in literature class during second semester of my bachelor study which I was totally loathe to, this time was in overlap with French language class that I would have loved to take in the language institution and it could help me to get a position in Quebec in Canada.
Moreover, making mandatory classes diffuse out the fun of class for the people who really like it. The students who have been compelled by the university to take the course will not take the class serious and will distract the other students. For example, I remember swimming course was mandatory in our university for fresh students and I took the course as a junior student to have fun, not only the class was not fun, but also I was exhausted after class because of the jokes of the students and jeopardizing their life only to laugh.
Finally, forcing is against democracy. Based on the statistics that I was reading in an article few months ago, it was written that when you force something on young students it can result in suppression of their freedom, and you might be successful in forcing your issue on them but this suppression will make them miserable in their future life and they will not be able to defend their rights in the society. This can be construed as a venom to the social dynamic and can make the students underdog against any duress.
In summary, having scrutinized the reasoning above, one can conclude that making the students to pass the history course under duress is not a good idea. On the grounds that they can pass a course which is related to their field of study, it can take the fun out of it and it is against democracy. Thus, we can suggest that history class should optional for the students.
- All university students should be required to take history class no matter what their field are.(agree or disagree) 73
- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. (agree or disagree) 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... to the social dynamic and can make the students underdog against any duress. In summa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, really, second, so, thus, as for, as to, for example, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58886509636 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46484761689 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44539614561 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.191597023 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.058823529 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4705882353 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259012723869 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978231639417 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065737155184 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157530435794 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552258974438 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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