Altruism
Altruism is a behavior type where the living being prioritize others to themselves.While the reading passage suggests some examples and the findings from it,the lecture proposes opposing conclusion from the findings.
The reading passage points out a specific species of animals, meerkats and their altruistic behavior by stating that one of the meerkats acts as a sentinel , protecting other meerkats who either hunt for food or eat food they have obtained by alarming them when it saw the predators nearby.Due to this, it goes without food while others eat.In contrast, the lecture posits that the sentinel eats beforehand and serves as the safeguard.
Furthermore, according to the passage the sentinel meerkat put itself in danger and the other meerkats escape as a group because of the alarm and the sentinel has to flee alone.But the lecture points out that the other meerkats are in danger because , even though the predators are attracted by the sentinel signals, their awareness turn to the group of meerkats which are escaping together or moving apart thereby putting them in danger.
The passage suggests that human by donating their organs to relatives or third person exhibits altruistic behaviour. But the lecture points out that the donor enjoys the appreciation received which is considered as self-worth, thus non-considerable reward may be valuable to some people, which in turn leads to non-altruism in them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-09-14 | Ashi15 | 60 | view |
| 2019-09-06 | kushagragupta01 | 60 | view |
| 2019-09-06 | kushagragupta01 | 76 | view |
| 2019-09-06 | kushagragupta01 | 3 | view |
| 2018-04-15 | Soltani Ali | 76 | view |
- Altruism 60
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 70
- Summarize the points made in the lecture 70
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...g being prioritize others to themselves.While the reading passage suggests some examp...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...s some examples and the findings from it,the lecture proposes opposing conclusion fr...
^^^^
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t one of the meerkats acts as a sentinel , protecting other meerkats who either hu...
^^
Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...g them when it saw the predators nearby.Due to this, it goes without food while oth...
^^^
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
..., it goes without food while others eat.In contrast, the lecture posits that the s...
^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...larm and the sentinel has to flee alone.But the lecture points out that the other m...
^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the other meerkats are in danger because , even though the predators are attracted...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, third, thus, while, as to, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29515418502 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79084742526 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.711988652 48.9658058833 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.4 100.406767564 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4 20.6045352989 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 5.45110844103 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767211211668 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05383694416 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659759716374 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062159622042 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629296953518 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 11.7677419355 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.01818996416 123% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 10.002688172 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.