Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
Nowadays ,development in technology has its own advantages and disadvantages.I personally think that parents should prevent young children from owning smart phones.While using it can have certain positives like detecting the location of the children when parents are not around them,it mostly spoils the children because of their immaturity.
To begin with, children usually attain some maturity when they are in their teen age, so till then the mind would be unable to detect which is right or wrong.Because of that ,there are chances that young children can fall into a trap. I heard a news few days before, where a young boy on playing the game PUBG, he lose the challenge and as a result he transferred ten thousand bucks from his parents account. This happens because the children have no idea about the value of money and the pernicious case he has put his parents on.If they gain some basic knowledge about the harmful activities ,they will stay away from this activities and that can be acheived through the development of mind.
Furthermore,using smartphone can distract their mind and spoils their education.Nowadays ,with the advancement in artificial intelligence,online games are fascinating and it will attracts us ,due to that children will get even addicted to it and they will not find time to study or do their homework, they will lose their concentration on what they have to focus.
And also, young children will not find playing outdoor games more interseting than playing in their smart phone. Physical activity in young childre plays a vital role for the development of brain and body, especially in their young age. If they did not use this precious time and do some lethargic activity, it will not be beneficial for them. Not only that, it can also hinders the creativity in them because their mind is restricted in to that tiny machine which is obviously not good for them.
To conclude, parents should forbid their young children from using smart phone, because of the reasons stated above like involving in malicious activities, lack of education and lack of physical activity and brain development.
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- Altruism 60
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 70
- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, then, while, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07954545455 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84824053997 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542613636364 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2078471885 48.9658058833 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.8 100.406767564 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 20.6045352989 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218238228587 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954124818359 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383018516223 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130907130644 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342272664768 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 11.7677419355 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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