Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why?
While some parents allow their children to have smart phones to be connected the new sophisticated world, I believe it's not the best idea , in fact, I totally agree with parents forbid their kids from having smart phones . I feel this way for several reasons . First, it's hard to keep tracking what they see and search while using their smart phones, for example some inappropriate websites and advertisements that promote adult’s content might pop up on their screen , and this is definitely not suitable for their age , in fact ,sometimes its difficult to explain to them why they shouldn’t be watching these kind of clips or photos . Secondly , some online games incite violence , in instance ,one of the most popular online games among children called Fortnite , it teaches children how to use guns, knifes and other weapons to kill others, to gain extra points . recently , psychologists and researchers have found that people who tend to watch violent scenes or get exposed to it by any other means during their childhood turn out to be more aggressive in their later lives compared to their peers who lived a very peaceful and quite childhood .
Last but not least , smart phones can distract children from doing their chores ,studying and doing their homeworks . For example my nephew was an A star student during his first and second grades ,his parents wanted to reward him ,so they bought him an iPhone as a gift ,but sadly he was busy with his new phone the whole time , that he started to get very bad scores in school , actually he did not improve again and got back to track until they took away his phone .
To sum up , smart phones can have some benifits but I believe their harm outweighs their benifts. That's why children should not own ones until they become more mature and responsible .
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smart phones cell phones with Internet access while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch Which point of view do you think is better and why 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, in fact, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77813504823 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40105578247 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.334235378 48.9658058833 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 165.111111111 100.406767564 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 5.45110844103 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248624528032 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106549578637 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595476657623 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172112209222 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129220638991 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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