It is undeniable that telling the truth is a proper topic which causes heated debate over a long period of time because it affects anybody in his daily lives. Depending on personal experience, personality type, emotional concerns, people differ greatly in their attitudes towards this issue. We find that some people hold the idea that truthfulness is more important than any other thing in a relationship; in contrary, others maintain that importance of telling the truth depending on situation and condition can vary. From my point of view, honesty is the most important thing in each relationship. There exist countless factors which influence this opinion; two of those are morality importance and legal prohibition.
The main aspects to point out is morality importance. Morality is one of the most significant factors to keep society respectful and coherent. Since society consist of several relationships among people, coherent relationships completely depends to morality fundamentals. Truthfulness is known as an important topic in morality and have a great role to have a permanent and respectful relationship. For example, my brother always try to conceal some rights and events from his wife, it gradually leads to destroy trust between them and consequently, after several debates and fights they divorced last year. This experience taught me that telling the truth is an important factor in each relationship.
A further more subtle points is that live healthier. Psychologists believe that people who tell the truth feel healthier that others because they feel less concerns, less stress and feel better about themselves. Based on a newly carried out research which performed in 2016 in Canada, it appears that people telling the truth during their daily live, have longer and healthier age length. Actually, truth telling has a direct relation with mental and physical illness rate and frequency.
To sum up, we can draw the conclusion that morality importance and healthier life are two fundamental reasons in truth telling in each relationship. From my perspective, we must tell the truth anytime except when truth telling leads to a serious problem such as death or heavy harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... which causes heated debate over a long period of time because it affects anybody in his daily...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun concerns is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...healthier that others because they feel less concerns, less stress and feel better a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'consequently', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269633507853 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.13612565445 0.158761421928 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107329842932 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366492146597 0.046263068375 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497382198953 0.0685040099705 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128272251309 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0261780104712 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85558167056 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020942408377 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00785340314136 0.00188951952338 416% => OK
Determiners: 0.0837696335079 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00785340314136 0.0209618222197 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130890052356 0.0139019557991 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2198.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 348.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.31609195402 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.396551724138 0.338922669872 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313218390805 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198275862069 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155172413793 0.112833075102 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85558167056 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566091954023 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 63.0712770833 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4705882353 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4555337307 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.294117647 120.699889404 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.411764705882 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 51.7924273158 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.90588235294 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409721453782 0.300154397459 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10217406137 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0651215651942 0.0752933317313 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491686908108 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136114556939 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149291783589 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105625003883 0.0781384742642 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.256792212484 0.336927656856 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0520190057874 0.067059652881 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266830188125 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063754150223 0.0618886996521 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.