Having the knowledge is a popular topic in our society. There is an idiom in our culture which states that "one who have knowledge, he has the power". People depending on their personal experience and personality type, differ greatly in their attitudes towards this issue. We find some people who holds the idea that we must have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects, others disagree with this notion. I am of the opinion that specializing in one specific subject is more appropriate. There are countless factors to supports this opinion, two of those are discussed below.
First, it can support us to became more professional in our field of study. It is obvious that today science and knowledge are differ greatly from what it be in the past. Science expanded broadly and we can hardly find some person who has a proper and deep knowledge in several subjects. It is clear that if we can focus on one subject and try to study and find more knowledge in this area, it is expected and is more accessible that we can became a professional person in this field of study.
Second, it can bother some people and leads to wasting the time. It is a common issue that we can hardly find people who like many academic subjects. For instance, some years ago, when I was a high school student, I had a friend who want to became a civil engineer and he has not any interest to learn about chemistry. But he should learn, study and pass its test and he always bother by this problem and finally he can't get a good score in this course and it make a negative effect on his future studying. This experience taught me that having broad knowledge of many academic subject can be so harmful for some people.
In sum, although some people agree with this idea that having knowledge in many academic subjects is useful, I am of the opinion that specializing in one subject is better. Because it helps us to became more specialist in one subject area and supports us to learn what we like.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...us that today science and knowledge are differ greatly from what it be in the past. Sc...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...owledge are differ greatly from what it be in the past. Science expanded broadly a...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...cted and is more accessible that we can became a professional person in this field of ...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'bothers'.
Suggestion: bothers
..., study and pass its test and he always bother by this problem and finally he can&apos...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... get a good score in this course and it make a negative effect on his future studyin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58823529412 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49785822622 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47619047619 0.524837075471 91% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3752436847 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88235294118 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21019311372 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811972042544 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871204647793 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163992956321 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100528705169 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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