Information Technology especially the internet is an important subject in our society because it affects everybody in his daily lives. Although some people holds the idea that the internet usage and it's information has so many problems, others believe that we can find a lot of useful information from the internet. I am of the opinion that nowadays using the internet as an unavoidable issue has a lot of benefit for people due to several reasons which two of those are discussed below.
First of all, the internet usage helps to promote the public awareness and knowledge. The internet as a facility which can simply reach everywhere and everytime, can make it possible to use it as a suitable announcement or even educating media. Today, there are a huge amount of news agencies which use the internet to publish and broadcast their news. For example, a few days ago we hear about a disastrous hurricane which announced using the internet and it can help so many people who does not have any accessibility to other media such as TV programs or newspaper, to move away from sea shores and other harmful places and go to safety locations.
Additionally, the internet usage make our live more convenience and suitable. There are a lot of rich and accessible information resources in the internet make it possible to refer there and easily find an article, a book or media about our question or problem. For instance, if we have a problem in our personal computer's operating system, we can instantly refer the internet and search it in Google and find a related forum to ask our question. Actually, there is not any requirement to go anywhere physically and probably waste our time and money.
In sum, in my opinion the internet usage and it's information get a lot of facility to the human lives such as promoting public awareness and making human living more convenient and flexible. Also, I believe that it is necessary that we must distinguish between correct and wrong information which exist in the internet. Indeed, we must notice to the resources publishing it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ducating media. Today, there are a huge amount of news agencies which use the internet...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238219895288 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.138743455497 0.158761421928 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890052356021 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0575916230366 0.046263068375 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0706806282723 0.0685040099705 103% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0994764397906 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0235602094241 0.0351676179071 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7643649809 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314136125654 0.0309702414327 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0968586387435 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183246073298 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0183246073298 0.0139019557991 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2068.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8418079096 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33615819209 0.338922669872 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271186440678 0.251872472559 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214689265537 0.174417080927 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138418079096 0.112833075102 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7643649809 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.0924395132 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2857142857 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8041019684 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.714285714 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.5533526081 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 52.4043583535 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.35294117647 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285250583531 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123989815467 0.103427244359 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0654494273909 0.0752933317313 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59509373723 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116242084645 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130137192379 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585238012487 0.0781384742642 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370799994248 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0298821662923 0.067059652881 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210276284165 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545105409436 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.