It is undeniable that financial supports at universities is a popular topic which has caused heated debates over long period of time because it affects students in their education and society at the future. Depending on personal experience, personality type, and emotional concern, people differ greatly in their attitudes towards this issue. We find that some people hold the idea that sport and social activities must receive equal financial support as classes and libraries; on the contrary, others maintain that learning and educational activities such as classes are more important than other activities. From my point of view, classes and libraries have high priority than other activities to receive financial supports. There exist countless factors which influence this opinion, two of those are importance of education at the university and also existence of social and sport activities anywhere.
The main aspects to point out is that university is a place of education and research. Actually, we know that university is a place where we can easily access to suitable and appropriate educational facilities such as libraries, laboratories or classes. In spite of proper sport and social infrastructure, if we have a university with a poor educational facilities, learning at this university does not has any attraction for talent students.
A further more subtle point is that sport and social activities are accessible anywhere. In fact, there are several social and governmental organizations who has a legal responsibility to prepare such a proper facilities. For example municipalities in each city usually prepare recreation areas such as parks and play grounds for public usage. So it is clear that if a student as citizen want to have an exercise can easily find an appropriate place in his/her neighbor. Consequently, if we do not have limited amount of budget, educational infrastructure have more priority to receive them.
To sum up, although some people believe that at university, sport and social activities are as important as classes and libraries to spend money, I am of the opinion that classes and libraries are more significant than other activities because there is educational demand from university and there are several responsible organizations to prepare sport and social facilities in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ich has caused heated debates over long period of time because it affects students in their ed...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...ve a university with a poor educational facilities, learning at this university does not h...
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Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...s, learning at this university does not has any attraction for talent students. A ...
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Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...s, learning at this university does not has any attraction for talent students. A ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...responsibility to prepare such a proper facilities. For example municipalities in each cit...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'consequently', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'in spite of', 'on the contrary', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263291139241 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.126582278481 0.158761421928 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.136708860759 0.0866891130778 158% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0405063291139 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0354430379747 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139240506329 0.118717715034 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0126582278481 0.0351676179071 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.06120396081 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0227848101266 0.0309702414327 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00506329113924 0.00188951952338 268% => OK
Determiners: 0.0658227848101 0.0887237588012 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00759493670886 0.0209618222197 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126582278481 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2333.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 364.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.40934065934 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414835164835 0.338922669872 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337912087912 0.251872472559 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.239010989011 0.174417080927 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.197802197802 0.112833075102 175% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06120396081 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 53.0657500773 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8255833809 48.84282405 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.642857143 120.699889404 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.5533526081 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 59.7912087912 45.7405998639 131% => OK
Elegance: 2.05 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360403222918 0.300154397459 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125061388205 0.103427244359 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690236482572 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524390764838 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166286818188 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144296567084 0.114077575197 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987289052125 0.0781384742642 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.357056450202 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00154881379158 0.067059652881 2% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257559329589 0.210909579961 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107244650256 0.0618886996521 173% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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