In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
The contribution is a primary fact to make something better. in agroup work work must be needed all persons contibution, not only new perons but also a experince's person. It is typically disputed that expert more likle to make imporatant contribution rather than beginner. Personally, I disagree with this statement, i believe that for any work, expert pay more attention rather than new person. I feel this way for several reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
First of all, what is the definition of expert? it is obvious that some one who experince and doing the same things long time. Although contibutions does not always deoneds on beginner or expert but it is surest that to gain any success must be needed exper contribution. In the beginning, as a starter needed to do somthing much and needed lots of trining since they can improve his or her self but this beginning effort could not surely bring any succed. for example, in a socar team always open for a beginner but always depends on the senior player more specifically like leonal messi in barcelona. Although when he joined barcelona tem as a good talanted player and makes lots of contribution but this team only when depnds ronaldinho. this dependence and contribution now shows in present barcelona team. moreover, for outcome from any task,though needed any persons contribution but always bring better and more positivily by the senior experince person.
Secondly, if we are trying to do something successfully, we need to always depend on expert people. to make a work sucessful, needed a joint hard work. expert always do something is like relaible without expert opinion and plane would not possible to bring any success. For example, if some one try to admit USA university must be needed some Knowledge about related field research experince. so, in every field always prefare expert people.
finally, contribution not only means to effort, it is always indicates lots of things. sometimes and it is important for beginner to do sometimg lots because actually this times helps to makes them experince but if something bring success then to considered contribution. For example, i wanted to bring my MS degree from USA university, thus i needed to work and a superviser though my supervisor only prefer me then he confirm my ability but it is true that supervisor is higly exper and doing lots of contribution rathen than as a beginner like me.
In conclusion, for doing better must be needed expert contribution besides beginner. Although someone belives that beginner impacts more rather than expert but i personally
belive that for any work expert contribution has lot.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06531531532 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76316014246 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490990990991 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 709.2 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5877788098 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7826086957 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3043478261 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69565217391 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257010352024 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813037411251 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714590906211 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153594892387 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274858590605 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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